Sunday, April 12, 2015

If You Only Knew



Although the topic is different, I got some ideas/inspiration for this poem from my friend Mandy Moore's poems, particularly Her Only Choice and Speak Up Sweet Child.

The point of this poem is that we shouldn't judge others because we have no idea what they're going through. That's not to say that sin is okay or that it should be encouraged. 


If you only knew


That this was not her choice


If you only knew 


Maybe you’d give her back her voice


If you could only spend


A few moments in her mind


Maybe you would stop


Before judging her this time


If you only knew


What she had missed when she was young


Maybe you would understand


Just how this all begun


If you could feel the boulder


Hanging from her heart


Maybe you would stop


Before tearing her apart


If you only knew


Struggle isn’t always sin


Maybe you would help her fight


And tell her she can win


If you only knew


That Jesus was a friend sinners


You might also be her friend


Instead of judging her a sinner


If you could only feel


Everything she felt


Maybe you would shut your mouth


Instead of saying, “Burn in Hell”


If you only knew 


That this was causing her to bleed


Maybe you would try to be


The friend she really needs


If you knew the guilt and shame


She carries every day


Maybe you would carry her


And not just turn away


If you only knew


That her time is running out


You would show her she is needed


Instead of causing her to doubt


If you only knew


Just how much she wants to live


You would step outside yourself


And to her freedom, give


If you only knew


That all she really wants is love


You would show her she is cherished


And washed with Jesus’ blood 


If you only knew 


That she is one of us


You would treat her like a treasure


Instead of trampling her like dust


2 comments:

  1. oh, Laurel, this is beautiful, but sad...
    May the Lord surround you with those who value your contributions, value you as an individual,
    value everything about your life!
    You are so precious! You are precious to our Lord, precious to your friends and those who know you,
    precious in His sight! And as you share your life with others, they are helped!
    May the Lord strengthen you for the fight, put all the tools in your hands for winning this battle...!!!
    He is able! Now to Him who is able to keep you from stumbling, and to let you stand in the presence of His glory, blameless with great joy, to the Only God our Savior, through Jesus Christ our Lord!
    Love you and praying, Donna Jeanne

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    1. Thank you! <3 I wasn't talking just about myself/my struggles in this poem... partly about me, partly about some friends, and partly about people I don't know.

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